Rough Cut Conclusion

Here will be the conclusion of my overall opinion of my groups rough cut, The Corridor

My first impression of the rough cut is seems to be a first good first cut with a good range of shots and the basic soundtrack seems to work well. however it does seem apparent a more shock sound for the character JABBA appearances.

I feel there is a good range of shots as there needs to be more shots to be added to the short timeline.

Institution Research

Here I am going to research some of the possible institution my groups film could be distributed through after its completion. Some of the ideas we could be looking at could be a Tv Movie or independent film release.

Film four seems to be a promising idea with it mainstream outlet and core audience

which expect differing genre shown on screen each week, Our film would be a good fright to place on there saturday or friday night line up.

With the independent film we believe the film would seem like a great idea

for it to be released as our core characters are original and very easy to enjoy and

to gain a audiences approval

The Corridor Rough Cut

Prelim task

Animatic Of The Corridor

Script

Scene 1 - Set - Atrium -Ext-Day

As this scene is the opening scene of the sequence it give little introduction but to have a quiet and sudden start.

Establishing shot of the Atrium

(Susan Bullet will enter the Atrium)

Mid Shot Of Susan

Susan Shows feeling of worry and dismay of the surroundings

Scene 2 - Set: Atrium - Ext - Day

This scene will be used to introduce the victim facial feature and star the feeling of the film.

Tracking shot of woman

(Woman is running down corridors)

Some closes up of facial expression of shock and fear

(Woman will keep looking back to find nothing)

eye line match

Scene 3- Set: College - Ext - Day

This scene will be used to start the tension and bring the horror a life and introduction to the minster of the film.

(Woman goes to hide in a doorway.)

There will be an eye line match of her looking down the corridor

(this is a dark figure emerges. The man is wearing a long dark coat and a hat (a long shot will be used)).

(He stops for a moment and starts walking towards her, down the corridor).

(Camera will go back to a close up of the woman sobbing, looking up (as if to say “why me”)).

(She will look again and the man will be gone)

Scene 4 - Corridor College - Ext - Day

This scene will be the big chase sequence which all backing sound and camera movement will echo this sentiment.

(She will breathe a sign of relief. Then a gloved hand with be put over her mouth)

(her eyes will widen.)

Scene 5 - Studio College - Ext - Day

(Another woman will wake up from a dream looking panicked.)

(She will look around her bedroom to find nothing.)

(Then she will lye back on her bed in a daze)

a medium shot will be used for this entire scene

Scene 6 - Studio College - Ext - Day

This scene is the climax of the opening scene this will have eerie soundtrack and incidental music.

(Susan Will enter Kitchen alone)

Medium shot of the door entering

(Susan will grasp a hot cup of Coffee)

(A Creaking Door)

(Susan Will Drop Cup)

Shooting Schedule

DATE	SCENE NO	D/N	INT/EXT	LOCATION NAME/ ONE LINE DESCRIPTION	CAST
23/2/2010	1	D	Internal	College - it is readily available	Lucy Morgan – Susan
23/2/2010-25/2/2010	2	D	Internal	College - First Floor To be used as balcony	Adam Spence - Jabber Lucy Morgan – Susan
26/2/2010-27/2/2010	3	D	Internal	Corridor College – This will be used for the chase	Lucy Morgan – Susan Adam Spence – Jabba
2/3/2010-4/3/2010	4	D	Internal	Studio – This is the wake up scene / end of dream sequence.	Lucy Morgan – Susan
4/3/2010-6/3/2010	5	D	Internal	Studio- Kitchen scene and the dropping of the cup scene	Lucy Morgan – Susan Adam Spence - Jabba